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Companies often use advertisement to create an amicable image. For example, tobacco companies agree to advertise the health concerns related to tobacco usage, but is that really what the company wants to offer?

因为考生的作文要被扫描到电脑里交给阅卷者评判，而方框外的内容是不会被扫描到电脑里的。

这句话可以说是在对全文做总结，同时又提出了问题的一个反面，和全文呼应。

可以写成In conclusion, we can learn something helpful from failures或者说In conclusion, failure can teach us something helpful等等。

that her talent became useless, because she needed to work to transform her talent into true skill and experience in order to achieve success, but she didn't have the motivation to follow through with this.

When the Columbia space shuttle disintegrated upon re-entry, the American people experienced a great tragedy led to a complete investigation of the space program. Deficiencies in the chain of command and the entire culture of NASA were exposed. As a result of the Columbia tragedy, NASA will re-examine its practices and change their ways so something like this doesn't happen again. Surely, this is a valuable thing to come from a horrible failure.

就这个题目，怎样开头呢？

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4分作文： Some people would say that something that is not successful does not have any value. I would have to disagree with this statement. Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle and the Vietnam War were not successful, but they had value. Thus, it is true that something not successful can still have value. For instance, the Columbia disaster. Columbia was destroyed in an accident when the shuttle tried to re-enter the atmosphere. This accident was a horrible failure and many people were very upset by it. The value, though, comes from the new way in which we now look at things. Because of Columbia, the space program now know what is wrong. Hopefully, they will change it. Vietnam is also an example of something not successful. We went to Vietnam in an attempt to get rid of communists. Thewar went on for a while, but we were not able to win. Many soldiers were killed and the public were very angry about the whole thing. Soon there were many protests across the country and college students especially became active against the war. By the time the war was ended the people were very upset with their country. These two examples show that something not successful can still have value. As we have seen, both Columbia and the Vietnam War were not successful. Yet, we got something of value out of them. 【点评】 开始段落把中心观点讲出来了，并且也有thesis statement。

In today's fast-paced, driven society, much emphasis is placed on the final result of an endeavour. American society places a premium on success; our culture has little tolerance for failures or losers. Within this culture framework it sometimes becomes easy to immediately dismiss failures. However, value is not found only in success. As the examples of the recent Columbia shuttle disaster and the Vietnam War demonsstrates, events that are not successful still have value.

可以这么说，当我们在做第二步确定论点的时候，事实上是受到第三步影响的。

所以我认为失败是成功的基础，对成功是有帮助的。

哪怕你真的是非常喜欢在外面吃，但是你觉得很难找到3个理由来证明在外面吃好，那么就干脆写在家吃好算了，即使你心里并不是这样认为的。

正式考试时，考生看到作文考题那一页，和本书上面的形式是一模一样的。

demonstrates severe flaws in sentence structure

而且答案已经给出来了那就是“决不人云亦云”。

Let's consider Julius Caesar, a hero in his own time but regarded, thanks mainly to Shakespeare's play, as a man with mortal failings: vain, superstitious and arrogant. He can no longer be thought of as a hero, but just a man who came to prominence for his actions at a certain point in history. He has his place in the history of the Western world and his face on ancient coins, but scarcely fits our need for a hero for all times whom we can revere.

下面我们再从写作的语言角度看看本文还有哪些可圈可点之处。

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