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而本文说王后寻找到了人生的快乐，而王子无法自拔于丧父悲伤，最终为抑郁所害。这观点读起来新奇有余，几乎令读者目瞪口呆。但是，这也从另外一个角度说明了作者思维独特，不愿人云亦云。
这充分说明作者对prompt和assignment进行了深刻的审题，进而深刻了解作文的要求。
总之，这个例子本身确实能打动人，要不落俗套。
或者说：虽然人人渴望成功，但那种侥幸的成功是不会长久的，只有经历失败，总结经验教训后获得的成功才是恒久的，等等。
从正面来看，作者还是了解了这篇作文的目的，对作文题的要求还是把握住了，有自己的观点，并且知道用例子来支持自己的观点。
Time has a doomsday book, on whose pages he is continually recording illustrious names. But as often as a new name is written there, an old one disappears. Only a few stand in illuminated characters never to be effaced.
这些作者，在深刻把握写作要求的基础上，能够鲜明地表达自己的观点，都能够选择非常具有说服力的例子来证明自己的观点。
从正面来看，作者还是了解了这篇作文的目的，对作文题的要求还是把握住了，有自己的观点，并且知道用例子来支持自己的观点。
【写作语言分析】
可以这么说，在开始段落，你必须正面回答作文题的问题。
An essay in this category demonstrates little mastery, and is flawed by ONE OR MORE of the following weaknesses:
To me, being an expert means being successful, and achieving success requires lots of hard work, time, and practice. This is true regardless of what you pursue, from running to drawing, acting to skating, teaching to dancing. Yet expertise and success don't come from skill alone. To truly succeed, you need to have at least as much motivation as talent, because if you don't posses the desire to do something, your talent may simply wither from neglect, and people who prove this to be the case include Jewel and my sister.
exhibits skillful use of language, using a varied, accurate, and apt vocabulary
焦作哪里有sat学习
首先，他会仔细阅读作文的第一段，据此得出该考生的语言能力，然后他会寻找作文的论点是什么，扫描该作文使用的例子是否能充分证明论点，最后，他会浏览作文的结尾，以保证从总体上把握该作文是否完整。
第二个句子划线部分是插入语，表附加细节；
In these instances such as these, more people show that they in fact do not want honest opinions, but to hear what they want to hear. However, this does not mean that they are not loyal friends or that they do not have loyal friends. A loyal friend will probably tell you the truth when you need to hear it. But what is perhaps more important to many people is that a loyal friend also knows just how and when to lie.
如果发现某个论点更容易找到例子，就确定写该论点。
所以，再次慎重提醒考生，千万不要一字不动地去背范文。
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