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比如，SAT满分作文的一个标准是逻辑性强，但这个逻辑性强又是怎么量化的呢？

An essay in this category demonstrates little mastery, and is flawed by ONE OR MORE of the following weaknesses:

There's a common saying usually applied to sports:"It's not whether you win or lose, it's how you play the game." This saying, however, can easily be applied to how we live and whether or not we are able to achieve personal happiness. As the Humboldt quotation suggests, it's not the events that occurs in our lives but rather the way we react to these events that most affects our happiness. Excellent representations of this can be found in Shakespeare's "Hamlet," where characters respond differently to the same situation and gain varying levels of happiness because of their respective reactions.

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可以这么说，当我们在做第二步确定论点的时候，事实上是受到第三步影响的。

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我们一再强调，同学们一定要广泛阅读，广泛收集各类经典素材，以备写作举例时使用的一个重要原因。

一个学生的阅读量越广泛，他的知识存储越丰富，在举例时候往往就会信手拈来，引经据典，作文的可读性就很强；

但是，由于文章在举例时没有把握好笔墨的重点，导致失分较大。

第二段，作者提到Jewel曾经非常落魄，还举了一些细节比如她一度以自己的车子为家（she was living in her car），但是她坚信自己成为一代歌手的梦想会实现。

反正意思不能和中心论点冲突，但在具体的遣词造句上应该灵活点。

下面我们介绍一篇获得满分的叙述形式的文章： Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.No one is contented in this world, I believe. There is always something left to desire, and the last thing longed for always seems the most necessary to happiness. Marie Corelli, A Romance of Two Worlds Assignment: Do you think that people are capable of finding happiness or are they always searching for something beyond what they have? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and example taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observation. 优秀范文： Happiness means different things to different people. My sister is happiest when she performs onstage in a play. My best friend is happiest when he is pitching a perfect game on the baseball field. People find happiness in all sorts of ways, but that doesn't mean they stop searching for something more. Finding happiness and continuing to pursue other goals are not mutually exclusive propositions. Instead, both of these activities can work together to motivate you, as I've learned from my own experience. When I was in middle school, my favourite class was art and I was disappointed that the class period was so short and only twice a week. Although I was happy during those times, I really missed art during the rest of the week. However, knowing that art class was approaching helped motivate me to pay attention in the rest of my classes because I knew that my "reward" would soon follow. Once we were in the art room and I was immersed in painting or sculpting or drawing, I found incredible happiness in the creative process and carried this feeling with me throughout the remainder of the day, yet I wasn't fully satisfied with this small amount of exposure and I wanted more. I did appreciate the happiness I had, but at the same time I was looking something beyond that. So I begged my parents to let me take art classes after school and on the weekend, I managed to convince them I'd be happier if I could have this additional creative time. Taking more and different art classes outside of school exposed me to a variety of different techniques and media that I never had time to explore in school, like metal-working, wood-carving and print-making. I grew even more enthusiastic about the visual arts and found even more happiness than I could have imagined thanks to these additional classes. By wanting something more, I was able to find additional contentment and inspiration and I truly was happy with the results. Yet I didn't stop reaching for other goals. I really wanted to have my artwork displayed for the public, so I worked very hard for several years to develop a portfolioand I achieved my goal last year with my first solo show at a local gallery. This success gave me much happiness, and I'm already planning additional shows. Being content with my art makes me happy on a regular basis, but this doesn't keep me from wanting something more at the same time. For me, striving for additional goals adds to my happiness, so I don't see the two actions as contradictory at all. Instead, searching for something beyond what you have can help you to appreciate and enhance whatever it is that makes you truly happy. 【点评】 这个作文题问的是，人们能否寻找到快乐，或人们是否总不满足于眼前的快乐？ 在第一段，作者首先说明对不同的人来说，快乐意味着不同的内容，人们可以找到快乐，但不会就此停止。

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.

虽然作文无定论，SAT作文也没有告诉你应该按照什么方式来开始一个段落，但熟悉套路的好处是，面对一个陌生的题目

displays fundamental errors in vocabulary

中式作文喜欢以理服人，英文作文喜欢你讲一个故事来证明一个大道理，所以，举例是整个作文成败之关键。

切记不要将内容写出方框。

和开始段落一样，结尾有些仓促，起码应该在此基础上多写两句话。

鲍威尔这句话的核心，不是忠诚是什么，而是讨论“真实”还是“照顾对方的情绪”两者的倾向问题。

displays very little facility in the use of language, using very limited vocabulary or incorrect word choice

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